my friend, I am not gonna lie to you, the coloring needs to be tightened up at bit. I like the dark ambiance, and am I correct in assuming the light source is from the computer screen? If so, it will look awesome once you up the contrast.
Finally a useful critique. Thanks for the input I wasn't sure if the dark Ambiance was working, This was a loose coloring that took an hour but it is true I always need to tighten the color and up the contrast
anytime dear. it is working, you just need to make the light source obvious. good job :)